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Oh my contempt
Oh my disdain
Suicide is what I'll attempt
As I stand in the rain

There is no one here
Who can stop what is fate
Don't draw to me near
It is already too late

I've made up my mind
I'll not alter my path
Blood is all you will find
In the bullets aftermath

As I take my last breath
And look in your eyes
I smile at death
And forget my despise
:iconchibbi-yaoi-fangirl:

Author's Comments

and another one

I'm a complete freak

Edit: had to edit the text just a tiny bit to make it sound better when I speak it

now it rolls off my tongue in a beautiful way

and I sound like a complete idiot so I'm gonna stop talking now

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:icongemini28:
*huhggles you..again* i just cant get enogh of your writing! its so dark, yet romantic!

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I ship that.

And that.

And rule 34 is totally dating rule 24. Im not even JOKING, yo. *jazzhands*
:iconchibbi-yaoi-fangirl:
thank you

I can't stop writting

I already working on an 11th poem

and I know right

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My pen is attached to my lungs...If I stop writting... I stop breathing...
:icongemini28:
0.0'' holy crap XD

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I ship that.

And that.

And rule 34 is totally dating rule 24. Im not even JOKING, yo. *jazzhands*
:iconchibbi-yaoi-fangirl:
yes shocking

I've done all these in the past hour

If this keeps up

I'll beat my record of deviations in a month TODAY!!!

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My pen is attached to my lungs...If I stop writting... I stop breathing...
:icongemini28:
holy.freaking SHIT

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I ship that.

And that.

And rule 34 is totally dating rule 24. Im not even JOKING, yo. *jazzhands*
:iconchibbi-yaoi-fangirl:
I ran out of ideas until it was too late
I'll still have enough up in the next couples days though

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My pen is attached to my lungs...If I stop writting... I stop breathing...
:icongemini28:
sweet. ^v^

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I ship that.

And that.

And rule 34 is totally dating rule 24. Im not even JOKING, yo. *jazzhands*
:iconchibbi-yaoi-fangirl:
yeah

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My pen is attached to my lungs...If I stop writting... I stop breathing...

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